In this story board, one of the negative things about it is that it doesn’t have much text to go with it or explain the images apart from the speech bubbles which are part of the illustrations. This is bad because it makes it more difficult to understand the pictures or the storyboard. Therefore, when I create a story board, I will remember to put speech to explain each illustration. However, the illustrations have a lot of detail which is good to visually see the idea.
In this storyboard, it isn’t clear at all. The illustrations are only sketches, making it difficult to see what the images actually contain.